Well, now yes, it took me a little time to figure out how to get into the pantyhose store. I would say it's not as impressive as the part with Becky and generally not as interesting as any other part. Personally, my opinion.
Not too bad! It's got potential! I am eager to see where the unfinished routes wind up going~
There are a few typos here and there, but nothing too distracting. The current routes are nice! Though going through a route only to find it unfinished is a little bothersome. Perhaps when you're about to make a choice that leads to an unfinished route, there could be a note saying that? That way we don't start to find a route and end up at a dead end? Just a thought.
All in all, I like the game so far.
Main thing I'd suggest right now is an easy fix. Just changing a word, basically: During the Pantyhose route, when the girl's day and boy's day at the shop is about to start, the main character wonders if the mistress is talking about "transvestites". This is an outdated term that many trans people, especially trans women, aren't really comfortable with, in my experience. I'd say in this case, saying "trans women"/"transgender women" or "trans people"/"transgender people" might be better?
Or, if you wanna get dirty about it, might I suggest "chicks with dicks"? :P That might fit in better considering how your story is worded, haha.
This isn't me calling you out or anything! I've got no ill will or bad faith for you. I realize that people don't just magically know this stuff unless someone tells them! So I figured I'd just let you know and offer you some alternative words!
.....Speaking of trans people, I hope that's planned in the story haha. Some non-transitioned trans girls with large dicks for our protagonist to suck off~ That'd be hot~
A nonbinary character would be neat at some point too.
Overall though my main gripe with the story is how the protagonist seems to faint every time she orgasms. It was interesting the first time, but it gets really trope-y and a bit weird when it's in multiple routes. How many real life girls straight up faint after orgasming? Is that a common thing that I just haven't heard of? Or is that simply a kink in itself or something? I mean this as constructive criticism, not hate. To me, it seems like this fainting may be a quick shortcut/excuse to timeskip. I'd maybe try to think of other ways to gloss over the passage of time?
That's just my personal opinion though. Some people might be super into that? Idk. It's just my thoughts.
As for what I'd like to see some of in the future: (non-lethal) heavy choking/breath play/asphixiation; some multiple orgasm torture (making her cum over and over til it hurts); and maybe some chastity belt with tease and denial until she's super desperate~
.........One of these days I really should make a second itch account for nsfw stuff instead of being horny on main like this lmao
Thanks a lot for this detailed feedback, Katey! I'm glad the game was worth writing it.
First of all, those faints - yeah, I should rethink this tool of making breaks in the story... and check-up the heroine's health!
That’s a good idea about marking unfinished routes… or, for current version, it’d be easier to mark the finished ones :) I think I’ll implement it in the future updates.
What about trans people, I’m not sure I understand you right. This passage wasn’t about transitioning, but about men who love to put on women’s clothes sometimes. I thought “transvestite” was the right word for it. But I could be wrong.
And adding the real trans people into the game is a good idea, they’ll definitely appear here!
Breath play, multiple orgasm torture and chastity belts… yep, they are in the game’s kinks list and will be added!
Thanks again for your feedback, especially considering it's goes your main itch account :)
Ah, so you were going for "men who like wearing woman's clothes sometimes". I see! Let's see... In that case, maybe the term "crossdressers" or "drag queens" would be more along the lines of what you are looking for 😊!
Glad to help. And ooo, I am very much excited to see those kinks eventually then! Thanks for responding.
My favorite kink overall is always bondage~
And dw, I'm the only one who ever really uses my itch account haha. It's enough effort already keeping up with 2 discord accounts lol. But mainly, I buy a lot of those massive itchio bundles that happen once or twice a year, and I just don't wanna have to buy them twice just to hide a few NSFW games onto a separate itch account. So, 🤷 I just bite the bullet and get horny on main here lmao
Always happy to see a creator who replies to feedback! Makes me all the more eager to keep track of the development of this.
What program are you writing this in? I should try writing a few stories myself with it!
The new 0.13 version has multiple orgasm torture kink... and it was you who inspired me to add it! Check it out, I'll be glad to receive your feedback!
That's a difficult question to answer without knowing anything about this hypothetical other game... but in any case, don't just make another game for me. I mean, if you want to, go ahead. But I'm not forcing you to.
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Sorry, can’t reply you in Chinese, but yep, the games‘s development is on pause, but it will definitely be back!
Oh . Did I forget to change the language? () Thank you for looking forward to the next update (how long will it take? I'm really curious
Will the things I translate with the translation software be weird (sorry
Thank you, that’s nice to hear! Yep, development is paused for now, but I hope to return to the game soon.
you can run it in browser
I absolutely love it, can we get more mummification and maybe some leather straitjacket, sleep sack and duct tape bondage, pretty please?
Thank you! Yeah, when I get back to making the game, I'll add these fetishes to new chapters
yay thank you, i'm really excited!
It's really cool, especially the part with Becky
thank you!
and have you met Linda in the pantyhose store?
Well, now yes, it took me a little time to figure out how to get into the pantyhose store. I would say it's not as impressive as the part with Becky and generally not as interesting as any other part. Personally, my opinion.
Thanks for feedback!
Do u got discord I would like to ask something
Yep, you can join our server:
https://discord.gg/yU5zUfnK7P
I wouldn´t mind joining but I would mainly join to ask u tht question in dm
Okay, dm me: slavesin#9956
I added u name is Snowwolf
Working on it!
Is it only text-based, or is the ownload version more visual?
Personally, I find it very hard to identify with a protagonist by just reading texts.
The online and downloadable versions are identic. Both have pics, but it's a text-based game, after all.
Interesting start
Not too bad! It's got potential! I am eager to see where the unfinished routes wind up going~
There are a few typos here and there, but nothing too distracting. The current routes are nice! Though going through a route only to find it unfinished is a little bothersome. Perhaps when you're about to make a choice that leads to an unfinished route, there could be a note saying that? That way we don't start to find a route and end up at a dead end? Just a thought.
All in all, I like the game so far.
Main thing I'd suggest right now is an easy fix. Just changing a word, basically: During the Pantyhose route, when the girl's day and boy's day at the shop is about to start, the main character wonders if the mistress is talking about "transvestites". This is an outdated term that many trans people, especially trans women, aren't really comfortable with, in my experience. I'd say in this case, saying "trans women"/"transgender women" or "trans people"/"transgender people" might be better?
Or, if you wanna get dirty about it, might I suggest "chicks with dicks"? :P That might fit in better considering how your story is worded, haha.
This isn't me calling you out or anything! I've got no ill will or bad faith for you. I realize that people don't just magically know this stuff unless someone tells them! So I figured I'd just let you know and offer you some alternative words!
.....Speaking of trans people, I hope that's planned in the story haha. Some non-transitioned trans girls with large dicks for our protagonist to suck off~ That'd be hot~
A nonbinary character would be neat at some point too.
Overall though my main gripe with the story is how the protagonist seems to faint every time she orgasms. It was interesting the first time, but it gets really trope-y and a bit weird when it's in multiple routes. How many real life girls straight up faint after orgasming? Is that a common thing that I just haven't heard of? Or is that simply a kink in itself or something? I mean this as constructive criticism, not hate. To me, it seems like this fainting may be a quick shortcut/excuse to timeskip. I'd maybe try to think of other ways to gloss over the passage of time?
That's just my personal opinion though. Some people might be super into that? Idk. It's just my thoughts.
As for what I'd like to see some of in the future: (non-lethal) heavy choking/breath play/asphixiation; some multiple orgasm torture (making her cum over and over til it hurts); and maybe some chastity belt with tease and denial until she's super desperate~
.........One of these days I really should make a second itch account for nsfw stuff instead of being horny on main like this lmaoThanks a lot for this detailed feedback, Katey! I'm glad the game was worth writing it.
First of all, those faints - yeah, I should rethink this tool of making breaks in the story... and check-up the heroine's health!
That’s a good idea about marking unfinished routes… or, for current version, it’d be easier to mark the finished ones :) I think I’ll implement it in the future updates.
What about trans people, I’m not sure I understand you right. This passage wasn’t about transitioning, but about men who love to put on women’s clothes sometimes. I thought “transvestite” was the right word for it. But I could be wrong.
And adding the real trans people into the game is a good idea, they’ll definitely appear here!
Breath play, multiple orgasm torture and chastity belts… yep, they are in the game’s kinks list and will be added!
Thanks again for your feedback, especially considering it's goes your main itch account :)
Lmao you're welcome!
Ah, so you were going for "men who like wearing woman's clothes sometimes". I see! Let's see... In that case, maybe the term "crossdressers" or "drag queens" would be more along the lines of what you are looking for 😊!
Glad to help. And ooo, I am very much excited to see those kinks eventually then! Thanks for responding.
My favorite kink overall is always bondage~
And dw, I'm the only one who ever really uses my itch account haha. It's enough effort already keeping up with 2 discord accounts lol. But mainly, I buy a lot of those massive itchio bundles that happen once or twice a year, and I just don't wanna have to buy them twice just to hide a few NSFW games onto a separate itch account. So, 🤷 I just bite the bullet and get horny on main here lmao
Always happy to see a creator who replies to feedback! Makes me all the more eager to keep track of the development of this.
What program are you writing this in? I should try writing a few stories myself with it!
Thanks, I think "crossdressers" will do!
Yep, in "Willingly", bondage is the king of all kinks :)
The soft I'm using is Twine, it's simple and very useful. If you need advice on it, you can contact me!
Great! And yeah, if I ever mess with Twine, I'll keep you in mind if I have any questions! Thank you!
The new 0.13 version has multiple orgasm torture kink... and it was you who inspired me to add it! Check it out, I'll be glad to receive your feedback!
The new update introduces chastity belts ;)
:o ooooo I'll update then hehe
Doesnt work for android zip files dont work
Hi TheManInBlack1! You can use some of ZIP unpacking apps (like Google Files, for example) or just play the game online.
Is enema one of the fetishes? If not then can you please add it?
Ofc, it will absolutely be added in further chapters!
I love becky you gotta have a longer section with her and without ron like I fucking hate ron
Like your last update it was huge. Are you planing on a next update?
Yep, there are many more updates planned. But the next one will take some time because of my personal issues.
The new version is live, check it out!
Wow, this is hot! Thanks for sharing all these delicious fantasies!
Amazing game, keep up the great work!
Love your game can't wait for a update! When will the next update be?
Thank you, Ddgio! I'm aiming at 10th or 11th of May, so your wait is almost over!
Looking forward to it
Its such an amazing game so far! The writing is really good and the characters implemented so far are really interesting! keep up the great work!
Thank you, Bambiitan! I'm writing a new chapter right now - hope you'll like it!
You can also rate the game (it's somewhere in the right part of screen), if you want - it'll help to spread the word about it ;)
Wow...im sooo into this! I hope that the next update won't let itself wait for too long! <3
Working on it! Thanks a lot, glad you liked the game :)
It took much longer than I expected, but here it is - the update! Willingly 0.12 The Mistress of Pantyhose Dolls
Good
Thank you, Shadow4545!
Are you planning to have a gender select for the PC eventually, or will they always be female?
The PC is female in this game. That was my point from the start, because I lack such games.
But maybe I'll make another game with a male PC. Would you be more interested in it?
That's a difficult question to answer without knowing anything about this hypothetical other game... but in any case, don't just make another game for me. I mean, if you want to, go ahead. But I'm not forcing you to.