Willingly

I’d like to talk to you, somehow, about a project I’ve been brewing, as you have a unique set of skills that could catapult this movement to an actual realistic stage and get it going. It’s primarily npo, so far, as I’m genuinely looking to focus on an educational interactive platform, and be allowed to legally operate, but this is only a beginning Development stage of the project. Once its actually up and running, both the npo and the business fronts will support each other. But, the forewarning about it being a founding and unfunded project is the most respect I can give, upfront.

it needs choices between everything what u say what u do e.t.c

I didn’t think I’d enjoy this game much since I usually prefer to play as a dom, but this is pretty good. Super hot. I like it. Can’t wait for the Mansion & Gangster routes to be out.

The wording and grammar are a little funky in a lot of places but still enjoyable.

I absolutely love it, can we get more mummification and maybe some leather straitjacket, sleep sack and duct tape bondage, pretty please?

It's really cool, especially the part with Becky

Do u got discord I would like to ask something

Is it only text-based, or is the ownload version more visual?

Personally, I find it very hard to identify with a protagonist by just reading texts.

Not too bad! It's got potential! I am eager to see where the unfinished routes wind up going~

There are a few typos here and there, but nothing too distracting. The current routes are nice! Though going through a route only to find it unfinished is a little bothersome. Perhaps when you're about to make a choice that leads to an unfinished route, there could be a note saying that? That way we don't start to find a route and end up at a dead end? Just a thought. 

All in all, I like the game so far.

Main thing I'd suggest right now is an easy fix. Just changing  a word, basically: During the Pantyhose route, when the girl's day and boy's day at the shop is about to start, the main character wonders if the mistress is talking about "transvestites". This is an outdated term that many trans people, especially trans women, aren't really comfortable with, in my experience. I'd say in this case, saying "trans women"/"transgender women" or "trans people"/"transgender people" might be better? 

Or, if you wanna get dirty about it, might I suggest "chicks with dicks"? :P That might fit in better considering how your story is worded, haha.

This isn't me calling you out or anything! I've got no ill will or bad faith for you. I realize that people don't just magically know this stuff unless someone tells them! So I figured I'd just let you know and offer you some alternative words!

.....Speaking of trans people, I hope that's planned in the story haha. Some non-transitioned trans girls with large dicks for our protagonist to suck off~ That'd be hot~ 

A nonbinary character would be neat at some point too. 

Overall though my main gripe with the story is how the protagonist seems to faint every time she orgasms. It was interesting the first time, but it gets really trope-y and a bit weird when it's in multiple routes. How many real life girls straight up faint after orgasming? Is that a common thing that I just haven't heard of? Or is that simply a kink in itself or something? I mean this as constructive criticism, not hate. To me, it seems like this fainting may be a quick shortcut/excuse to timeskip. I'd maybe try to think of other ways to gloss over the passage of time? 

That's just my personal opinion though. Some people might be super into that? Idk. It's just my thoughts.

As for what I'd like to see some of in the future: (non-lethal) heavy choking/breath play/asphixiation; some multiple orgasm torture (making her cum over and over til it hurts); and maybe some chastity belt with tease and denial until she's super desperate~

.........One of these days I really should make a second itch account for nsfw stuff instead of being horny on main like this lmao

Doesnt work for android zip files dont work

Is enema one of the fetishes? If not then can you please add it?

Like your last update it was huge. Are you planing on a next update?

Love your game can't wait for a update! When will the next update be?

Its such an amazing game so far! The writing is really good and the characters implemented so far are really interesting! keep up the great work!

Wow...im sooo into this! I hope that the next update won't let itself wait for too long! <3

Good

Are you planning to have a gender select for the PC eventually, or will they always be female?